六、阅读下面材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
6、 Read the following materials and write an article of no less than 800 words according to the requirements.
统编版小学课本识字第一课的内容为“天地人你我他”,这六个字引导儿童时期的我们认识世界,了解世界。如今,我们已经成为高一年级的学生,应对这六个字有更深刻的理解。要成为一个怎样的“人”,需把“我”放在“天地”“你他”之间去思考。
The content of the first lesson of literacy in the unified edition of primary school textbooks is "Heaven, Earth, Man, You, Me, Him". These six words guide us in our childhood to understand and comprehend the world. Now that we have become first-year students, we should have a deeper understanding of these six words. To become what kind of "person" one needs to think about "me" between "heaven and earth" and "you and him".
请结合上面的材料,围绕“成为一个怎样的人”的话题,写一篇文章。
Please write an article on the topic of "what kind of person to become" based on the above materials.
要求:选准角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要套作,不得抄袭;不得泄露个人信息;不少于800字。
Requirements: Choose the right angle, determine the intention, clarify the style, and draft the title on your own; Do not copy or plagiarize; Do not disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words.
【范文参考】:
[Sample reference]:
成为一个真正的人
Becoming a real person
哲学家说:“人是万物之灵长。”人区别于其他生命,是世间独特的存在。“天地人你我他”,启迪我们站在哲学的高度,看待天地——我们所处的客观世界,对待你他——我们身边的每一个人,才能使自身区别于其他生命,成为一个真正的人。我辈青年当以辩证的眼光看待世界,以利他的心灵对待其他人,方能成为一个真正的人。
Philosophers say, "Humans are the primates of all things." Humans are distinct from other forms of life and are a unique existence in the world. The saying 'Heaven, earth, man, you, me, and him' inspires us to stand at the height of philosophy, to view the world of heaven and earth - the objective world we live in, and to treat everyone around us - in order to distinguish ourselves from other life forms and become a true person. Our young people should view the world with a dialectical perspective and treat others with their own hearts in order to become a true person.
天地有道,自然界的客观规律不以人的意志为转移,因此人处天地之间,任何行为都逃不出自然规律。为了成为一个真正的人,我们应当去认识、去研究这个世界的客观发展规律,方能更好地应对生活、迎接未来。郭橐驼植树是“顺木之天”的,他不盲目臆断树木生长的方式,而是抱着研究的态度,在观察中总结植树经验,获得顺应树木客观生长规律的植树方式。为人亦如此,我们的行为、人生态度同样要基于自然规律和社会发展规律。破坏环境、反对常识、不尊重科学都是违背规律的,这些行为只会使人回到下意识的生物状态,使人归于兽性而丧失了成为真正的人所需要的辩证思考、理性精神和对客观规律的尊重。
There is a way in heaven and earth, and the objective laws of nature are not subject to human will. Therefore, when humans are between heaven and earth, no action can escape the laws of nature. In order to become a true person, we should understand and study the objective laws of development in this world, in order to better cope with life and embrace the future. Guo Tuotuo planted trees in accordance with the principle of 'following the trees'. He did not blindly speculate on the growth patterns of trees, but instead adopted a research attitude, summarized tree planting experience through observation, and obtained tree planting methods that conform to the objective growth laws of trees. As human beings, our behavior and attitude towards life should also be based on the laws of nature and social development. Destroying the environment, opposing common sense, and disrespecting science are all violations of laws. These behaviors will only lead people back to their subconscious biological state, causing them to revert to animalistic nature and lose the dialectical thinking, rational spirit, and respect for objective laws necessary to become true humans.
“我”在“你他”之间,则反映了人永远不可能成为一座孤岛。作为一种群居动物,人永远生活在同类之中。我们要想成为真正的人,就必须学习如何与其他同类以不同于其他生命的方式相处,学会巧妙地处理群己关系,从而更好地生活。基于对天地间自然规律的思考,我们可得出人生而平等的结论,每个人都是大自然的结晶。(欢迎关注“语文考霸”)而面对资源有限的地球,每个人的欲望又难以在不危害他人的情况下全部满足,因此有必要舍弃一些欲望,去追求互利共赢。当人们能舍弃自私的欲望,以利他主义的态度对待身边的人、尊重每一个与自己平等的个体时,人才能成为与弱肉强食的动物所不同的,真正的人,社会才能得到和谐与发展。
'I' between 'you and him' reflects that a person can never become an island. As a social animal, humans always live within their own kind. If we want to become true people, we must learn how to interact with others of the same kind in a way that is different from other forms of life, learn to skillfully handle group self relationships, and thus live better. Based on the contemplation of the natural laws between heaven and earth, we can conclude that all people are born equal, and that everyone is a crystallization of nature. (Welcome to follow "Chinese Language Exam Leader") However, facing the limited resources of the earth, it is difficult to satisfy everyone's desires without harming others. Therefore, it is necessary to abandon some desires and pursue mutual benefit and win-win results. When people can abandon selfish desires and treat those around them with an altruistic attitude, respecting every individual who is equal to them, they can become different from animals that prey on the weak. Only then can society achieve harmony and development.
面对百年未有之大变局,人类社会愈加复杂,气候变化、新冠疫情、局部战争等危机空前严峻。秉承着成为真正的人的理念,青年方可为这些危机的解决做出贡献。尊重自然规律,寻找环境友好型的发展方式,使人类能缓解生态危机;以守望相助的温情和尊重科学的态度,为陌生人撑起生命之伞,为消灭病毒筑起爱的防线,疫情的阴霾才会最终散去;以利他的精神和平等博爱之心面对每一个受苦的人,残酷的战争与暴力才会在世上绝迹。可见,于天地你我间思考什么才是真正的人,会帮助我辈青年迅速成长为“为生民立命”的、有天下情怀的栋梁之材,而尊重客观规律与践行利他主义则是成为真正的人的不二法门。
In the face of great changes that have not occurred in a century, human society has become more complex, and crises such as climate change, the COVID-19, and local wars are unprecedentedly severe. Adhering to the concept of becoming a true person, young people can contribute to the resolution of these crises. Respect the laws of nature, seek environmentally friendly development methods, and enable humanity to alleviate ecological crises; With the warmth of mutual assistance and respect for science, holding up the umbrella of life for strangers, and building a defense line of love to eliminate the virus, the shadow of the epidemic will finally dissipate; Facing every suffering person with the spirit of altruism and the heart of equality and universal love, cruel war and violence will disappear from the world. It can be seen that thinking about what constitutes a true person between us in heaven and earth will help our young people quickly grow into pillars of society who are dedicated to serving the people and have a global sentiment. Respecting objective laws and practicing altruism are the two ways to become a true person.
人之于世,最宝贵的是人能脱离单纯的动物性,成为有理性、能思考的生命,而真正的人,一定是能发挥这种理性,去思考天地万物的规律、去共情每一个像自己一样初到世界的个体,去用“无穷的远方,无数的人们都与我有关”的博大来面对未知。成为真正的人,我辈必将为民族、为国家、为整个人类社会的进步,做出更大的贡献。
The most precious thing about human beings in the world is that they can break away from their simple animalistic nature and become rational and thoughtful beings. True humans must be able to use this rationality to think about the laws of all things in the world, empathize with every individual who is new to the world like themselves, and face the unknown with the vastness of "endless distance, countless people are related to me". To become a true person, our generation will surely make greater contributions to the progress of the nation, the country, and the entire human society.
【解析】
【 Analysis 】
【详解】本题考查学生的写作能力。
This question tests students' writing ability.
审题:
Title:
这是一道话题作文题。
This is a topic essay question.
材料以小学识字课中的“天地人你我他”六个字为切入点,引导高中生思考“成为一个怎样的人”这一深刻命题。
The material takes the six characters "Heaven, Earth, Earth, You, Me, Him" from elementary school literacy classes as the starting point, guiding high school students to think about the profound proposition of "what kind of person to become".
“天地人你我他”六个字,让我们认识到世界除了“我”之外,还有天地、你他,让我们知道世界是丰富的。伴随成长,我们对“天地”“你他”的认识不断深入。“天地人”三个字代表了人与自然的关系,提示我们要敬畏自然、顺应规律,同时也要认识到人类在天地间的独特地位。
The six words' heaven, earth, man, you, me, and him 'make us realize that besides' I', there is also heaven, earth, and you and him in the world, and let us know that the world is rich. As we grow up, our understanding of "heaven and earth" and "you and him" continues to deepen. The three characters' heaven, earth, and man 'represent the relationship between humans and nature, reminding us to respect nature, follow laws, and also recognize the unique position of humanity in the world.
“你我他”三个字则指向人际关系。从认识自我开始,到理解他人,再到融入社会,这是一个逐步拓展的过程。在成长中,我们既要保持个性,又要学会换位思考,培养同理心。特别是在当今多元化的社会中,如何与他人和谐相处显得尤为重要。
The three words' you, me, and him 'refer to interpersonal relationships. Starting from self-awareness, understanding others, and then integrating into society, this is a gradual process of expansion. In our growth, we need to maintain our individuality while also learning to put ourselves in others' shoes and cultivate empathy. Especially in today's diverse society, how to get along harmoniously with others is particularly important.
材料特别强调要把“我”放在“天地”“你他”之间思考,这启示我们:一个人的成长,既要在天地间找到自己的位置,又要在人际关系中实现价值。从“天地人”到“你我他”,这六个字勾勒出一个完整的人生坐标。作为高中生,我们正处在人生观形成的关键期,需要在这六个维度上不断探索、反思和实践,最终成为一个既有独立人格,又有社会责任感的全面发展的人。
The material emphasizes the need to think about "me" between "heaven and earth" and "you and him", which enlightens us that a person's growth requires finding their place in heaven and earth, as well as realizing value in interpersonal relationships. From 'heaven, earth, man' to 'you, me, and him', these six words outline a complete life coordinate. As high school students, we are in a critical period of forming our outlook on life, and we need to constantly explore, reflect, and practice in these six dimensions, ultimately becoming well-rounded individuals with both independent personality and a sense of social responsibility.
写作时,开头可从材料切入,引出中心论点:人应当在天地的广袤、他人的关联中定位自我价值。中间部分可先阐释“天地”象征的自然规律,人需敬畏天地而获得精神高度;接着分析“你他”代表的社会关系,强调通过利他实现自我价值;最后论述“我”作为连接点的主体性,既要保持独立人格又要承担社会责任。结尾指出这六个字蕴含着做人最朴素的智慧,呼吁在天地格局与他人关怀中成就大写的人。
When writing, the beginning can start with the material and introduce the central argument: people should position their self-worth in the vastness of heaven and earth and the connections with others. The middle part can first explain the natural laws symbolized by "heaven and earth", and people need to respect heaven and earth to gain spiritual height; Continuing to analyze the social relationships represented by 'you and him', emphasizing the realization of self-worth through altruism; Finally, the subjectivity of 'I' as a connecting point is discussed, which requires both maintaining independent personality and assuming social responsibility. At the end, it is pointed out that these six words contain the simplest wisdom of being a person, and it is called upon to achieve greatness in the pattern of heaven and earth and the care of others.
立意:
conception:
1.立天地之心,行利他之事。
1. Establish the heart of heaven and earth, and do altruistic things.
2.知天地之大,明自我之责。
2. Know the vastness of heaven and earth, and understand one's own responsibilities.
3.与天地共呼吸,与你他同悲欢。
3. Breathe with heaven and earth, share joys and sorrows with you.